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Part of my collection "Experimental Biology". I've done this within a couple of hours on cardboard with acrylic and soft pastels.
Improvement-ClubI want to ask for critiques on whether I was able to make a surreal type of art look realistic?


All comments, faves, watches, etc. APPRECIATED VERY MUCH

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Hi ! I came from :iconimprovement-club: :)

well, you did a good job on this ! :D (even if the effect is broken by the watermark, uhhh, I can't enjoy your pic! but I understand that, with your level, you don't want your drawings to be stolen ^^)

if you really want advices on what you can improve...... here I come :D : you could add a bit more shadows and reflections on the white parts of the eye : it would enhance the glassy and spheric effects :).  then, on the eyelashes reflection : given that the eye isn't a very reflective surface, the eyelashes shouldn't be drawn in black (it's just my opinion : I would have draw them just by adding white around the emplacement where they should be, but it's not very important... ) moreover, the eyeball tends to flatten the reflected images (which appear more rond.. idk if I express well, english isn't my first language ^^) but I don't think the reflections of the eyelashes should be smaller than the eyelashes themselves...(for exemple, look here a400.idata.over-blog.com/1/01/… )
last thing... I'd draw the white borders (the ones inside the iris) messier ^^ 
alright... I'm finding little details, but know that your picture is totally awesome. I'll probably never reach that level of detail and realism you have, but tried to help you getting a bit closer to perfection ^^


keep up the good work ! your realism level is over 9000 ! ;)